Junior Survey! (miércoles, 14 de diciembre de 2011),
My Junior Survey was today, and it was awesomeeeee!!!! My critique:
• Excellent presentation
• Your enthusiasm really comes through your work (Gerbs said this :)
• Drawing the infographics on the people for the crime booklet was a great idea. But in the case of a real campaign, you should rethink the crops and angles and drawings.
• Synthesizer as a package was good idea. One of the better ones we've seen so far
• The "Capital" and "1" parts of your Capital 1 logo aren't balanced because of the colour contrast. The black of the "Capital" stands out really well, but the yellow circle isn't as vibrant.
• I Like the AIG logo—how the letters look like they're falling into each other. It's not constrained by shape in a box. Be careful with the typeface though. It makes it look too much like the AIGA.
And then, as Cecilia, the ComD Assistant Chair, escorted me to the door, she asked me if I wanted a job. :DDDDDDDDDDD
I bumped into Shamir outside Steuben afterward, and he suggested that I make the "Capital" smaller or lighter. "Smaller than the circle?! Will that fit?!" Apparently so! I shall try it upon my return from London. He also remarked that he had commented the same thing all those months ago lol. I vaguely remember him doing so, but I must not have paid it much attention at the time -.- Silly ChiaLynn.
miércoles, diciembre 14, 2011